Writing-competition-129-based-on-my-digital-image-now-you-are-the-author-of-planet-x

in WORLD OF XPILAR9 months ago

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The story is based on the digital drawing made by @xpilar, this drawing brings to mind the ring portrayed in the movie, the lord of the rings. It looks to me like the one ring made by Sauron to rule all life, and the memory made me smile.
On this note, I will tell a story with a similar point of view with the movie, but with an encompassing notion of the effects of the ring. Hence, my story:
It all started one cool evening during the spring, and Rachel just had an intense argument with her Bob, her father. Their misunderstanding was due to desire not to go college, and her dad thought otherwise. It happens that Bob had mapped out her future without her consulting or asking for her opinion. According to him, he was expecting so much from her and obviously he was disappointed she chose a different path. All Rachel wanted from her childhood was to be a singer, and damn she has a very good voice. She had even created a band; they meet up a couple of times a week, have fun and do what they do best. She called her band, “The light bearers”. They are really hoping for a serious deal of sponsorship to promote the band to a greater level.
Rachel was upset after the argument, so she decided to take a walk to catch her breath and hopefully take her mind off the things bothering her. As she walked down the road, she sought for a solitary place where she could have privacy. Sighting from afar, she saw an abandoned farm that had structures and rocks surrounding it, she decided to stay there a while and clear her mind. After spending about an hour, her eyes gained the attention of a shiny object in the dirt. She ignored at first, but as her eyes kept mopping at the object she could not resist the urge to see what it might be. Moving closer to the location of the object, which majority of the body part was dipped inside the dirt. She dipped her hand and pulled it out, it happens to be a strange gold ring. After cleaning the ring with her clothes, the ring was so shiny like something out of this world. Rachel looked around to see if anyone saw her, seeing no one around, she dipped the ring into her pocket with a smile. In this her few moment of discovery, she seems to have forgotten her sorrows.
The discovery of the ring seems to take her mind off of the recent events at home. She contemplated whether to return or keep it, and then suddenly she went to the police to submit the ring. They were surprised at her honesty, and they celebrated her. The quality and texture of the ring shows it was not made from this planet, maybe another. The question that was in mind of the police was how it got here in the first place? It was at this moment she realized she had let her dad boss her around for too long and she needs to come out of her shell. On getting home, she made her opinion known to Bob, he was upset but she stood her ground because she had finally realized she was treading the right path. After a while, the police could not find the owner or the whereabouts of the ring, so it was placed in the museum in honor of Rachel. Bob came to his senses and respected her opinion after he discovered what she had done with the gold ring she found. Her life was never the same again.

You can also participate in the contest through the link below:
https://steemit.com/hive-185836/@xpilar/writing-competition-129-based-on-my-digital-image-now-you-are-the-author-of-planet-x

Thank you for your time...

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 9 months ago 

thanks for great story i enjoyed it

Sure, I'm glad you like it.

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