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RE: Il rumore della dispersione (IT-Eng)
It's hard to see where the poem start and what you say. Did anyone gave you a hand with some markdown codes so you can separate the poem from the rest of the text? I wonder why you have those huge whitelines between every sentence it makes reading harder and there's a lot to scroll on a phone. I admit I lost what you like to say all I am left with is your words: When will this noise end.
What noise? Do you hear voices?
Hello! Thank you for reading me ☺️
This is a text/poem written by me.
As I wrote in the text I wanted to express a feeling: the noise of dispersion.
It should not be understood but interpreted.
For the thing about the huge space between sentence I apologize because I usually use another site to make posts. I fixed it should be ok now.
Ps :the noise was referring to the beating of the heart