You have shared nicely some competitive advantages of decentralized wallet over centralised wallet from your experience point of view. You could add some example to make it more clear to the readers.

The quotation markdown you are using in your post is not appropriate here because this markdown is only used for quoting someone's post or part of writing. Try to collect it from next post.

And use #tronfanclub instead of #trxfanclub among first 4 tags. Previously the community tag was #trxfanclub but now it changed to #tronfanclub
Thank you