RE: "SC-S32/W5-"Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—The Work Diary.
Here is my moderation guide...
I can see you have really plan goals to achieved for the day .As a business person you had to be at work on time .From your point you had a good sale of rod at work and both at shop placed .Eventnough, the shop one was less than you expected . I can see you really have passion for work and you bent in marketing your rods company business well .Which attract alot of sales .
My observation is that you, took more than two selfie pictures for yourself which is against the rule .You are only expected to share one picture of yourself. also, you gave us a good plan of your day . At the end of your writing to make your work more interesting .I was expecting you to give us a summary of challenges you faced during the day , how you overcome , what you achieved and lessons learned .From the activities you carried out today .
. We have assessed your assignment post , below captures our assessments.
| Criteria | Remark |
|---|---|
| Real user | ✔️ |
| #steemexclusive | ✔️ |
| Free of Plagiarism | ✔️ |
| AI Article | (Human text!) |
| Bot free | ✔️ |
Comment/Recommendation
- The beauty of diary writing: 5.7 marks
- Following the rules: 1.8marks
- Markdown Usage: 1 mark
- Comments: 1 Mark
Scores| 9.5/10