Dear friend, @senhasa
Thank you very much for inviting me to this competition. You have very skilfully depicted the next part of your story and the description of the scene of the incident is very good. But one curiosity remained in my mind that what happened to Jonas?
Have you planned to write a sequel to solve this mystery?
Or by keeping this question unanswered you are forcing us readers to think for ourselves what might have happened to Jonas?
I am coming soon.