Written Poem "The Last Hour of Waiting"Best Regardsby@rahul989

in Steem For Pakistan2 years ago
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Poetry:The last hour of waiting

Writer:Rahul

If you ever come back, you'll know I'm alone.
Finding your way is very difficult.
happiness , a cheerful bird
A door opened.
But your forgotten memories are still writing on the pages of life.
My mind was filled with excitement, but today the unknown path is disturbing the mind.
It seems as if the waves of the stormy sea are not afraid of the water playing in the two eyes.
The days fade away on the last bed of life, yet a broken heart still waits for you with new hope.

Summary:
Here the name of the poem is ' The last hour of waiting' which means the last waiting of the poet's life. Also, from the force of words in the poem one can feel that the poet's mind is painful and burdened. Even though he is on the verge of exhaustion with his anguished mind, the poet expresses the hope of reaching his loved one in the painful tone of longing and crying.

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 2 years ago 

"""""It seems as if the waves of the stormy sea are not afraid of the water playing in the two eyes.""""""

This line of your poem is very similar to real life. Because when a person dreams to do something and keeps that dream well embedded in the mind, if the person does not succeed in that task, then he blames himself a lot and ignores his life as a waste. But at such times people should be turned around again. By dealing with all the problems you will find the meaning of this line in your poem. Here all problems can be described as sea water and tireless work for success in your life can be described as storm.

 2 years ago 

Nice to see your comment bro. Thank you very much.😍

 2 years ago 

My mind was filled with excitement, but today the unknown path is disturbing the mind.

I like this point so much. Some time I also feel like that.Keep share this type of beautiful poem.I am waiting for your next poem.

 2 years ago 

Nice to see your comment bro. Thank you very much.😍

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 2 years ago 

very nice poem my friend

 2 years ago 

thank you so much.. 🥰

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