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RE: "One Picture And One Story": A Hidden Treasure
You wrote a nice story, written in a beautiful manner, with a good lesson. I was actually hoping she would get the treasure but the way you added plot twist was cool. Good luck for the contest.
Thank you for the remarks nafeela:
Initially, she was to get the treasure but supposed to lose it by the end of the day.
Adding a key as a treasure: i would say it has written itself, never thought i could be her treasure👧