Steemit Engagement Challenge | S7W5 | Creativity - Write a Story | Speak Up of an innocent girl
Assalam-o-Alaikum ✨ |
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Creativity is like a wild man and having disciplined Eye. Creativity is one of the most beautiful and complex part of human life. There is no such thing as Original idea. Be original and be athentic. Out your ideas on paper through writings. Greetings friend , I'm Aalia Rubab. Today , I'm going to share my creativity for all Steemians. It's great opportunity for all of us , original creator , share our ideas and reveal the hidden problems in a way that it can be refined and reform.
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According to me , a good writer is one who writes for the reformation of society. Reformation is something that is necessary for progress. A pen is always mightier than swords. That's why writer , poet have great importance because they use different figures of speech to highlight the problems of issue. Being a writer , I'm going to share my creativity.
It is a story of an orphan little and innocent girl. After the death of his father , she and her mother have to suffer a lot. Because in Patriarchal Society there is inequality of rights. There are so many problems she has to suffer e.g
- Gender Descrimination
- Single Child Parent
- Inequality and injustice
- Manipulation of rights
- Males are males
- Females are bound to their houses
- Education is only for the boys
- Patriarchal System itself a major problem
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She Speak Up for her rights. After a great struggle she achieves what that she wants. So basically it's a story of girl how she get success after sufferings a great problem and hurdles. But she never give up.
"Try not to become a man of success, but rather try to become a man of value."
Albert Einstein
Let's get started : stay tuned with me.
Setting : A hot day of August, A dark and square room , A village , a girl is sitting in the dark room. She has a book on bed. She is in shock because she is not expecting like that. It is crucial time for her. She is mature enough to handle this situation. Her mother supports here decision. She is bounded in patriarchy where girls are consider bad if she speaks up. But she is showing revolt against the norms and traditions of patriarchy. She is a rebel. Sun is on its peak. Sun rays awakes her passion.
Time: afternoon , 12 : 00 o clock
- Ammara ( a girl who take decision and speak up for her rights)
- Razia Begum ( Ammara's Mother)
- Baba Ji ( Depicting a true picture of patriarchy)
On a hot August afternoon, the sun shone across the sky in its full glory. She was crying alone in a small and dark room. In this dark room, a large wardrobe was placed on one side, the fan was running at its full speed, some clothes were scattered on the bed. In the kitchen opening in front of the room, Razia was preparing to cook. The time had come when the right decision should have been taken.
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This warm environment also challenged his inner passion. There is a small village in which she was mourning the death of her father while staying in a small house. Amara, with despair, was wondering what to do now, when a frustrated sob broke out on her face. Babaji of this village came with some of his friends. They knocked on the door.
As soon as Razia Begum heard the knock, she asked;
"Who has come to the door in this heat?"
The pursuit of a horrified and hoarse voice made Razia think. Babaji came in and started talking to Razia Begum. Razia Begum was keeping her eyes on Amara while moving them around. Razia entered room with heavy and shaky feet where Amara was sitting with her book. Razia informs Amara that Babaji came without telling her. Amara understood as well. Both Razia and Amara sat down in the dark room.
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Razia Begum consoled her and said, "Daughter is very attached to father. What is this connection, It takes away the happiness of a person". A society where equality is the name of the game and where economic conditions and instability make life miserable anyway, there can only be mourning. Amara questions Ami. "Can't girls get an education?". Are we living in such a society where women are confined only to houses, we can live as we want, nor can I eat as we want, My father, he brought me here, then Baba Ji told me what is the problem with you with me decison? Thus, many questions were encamped.
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The coldness of Babaji's attitude was making tears flow like pearls from Amara's shining eyes.
She was remembering something inside that she often asked her father. "Why is it considered a crime to give mental freedom to women here". This anxiety and restlessness filled Aamara's attitude. Rosy pink cheeks, wide eyes, arched eyebrows dominating the forehead, Amara was watching her tears falling like pearls on her Dupatta. Picking up one side of the dupatta and cleaning her face, she stood up. Twelve years of education had surely made her so conscious that she could make an excellent decision.
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She said that if I accept Baba Jan's decision today, then for many years women will be restricted to four walls. She will just remain a mental slave. The destination is definitely difficult but not impossible." Addressing Baba Ji, she said yes, "This education has enabled me to know right from wrong. So you people have to accept my decision. They lost consciousness and were falling," Amara said. Babaji said while raising the question, "Have you been taught in your education that you should use your tongue in front of elders?" Amara said, "Education and my home training have enabled me to know right from wrong." Therefore, I am not going to withdraw from my decision. Razia Begum and Amara went into the room in front of the kitchen, which had a window opening onto the lawn.
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To breathe in the open air. Amara said, "I am not afraid of anyone because I want that after me no restrictions are imposed on girls in my village, mother , so I will prove through education that education is not only important for men but also for women ".This patriarchal system has also deprived women of their legitimate rights." Razia Begum paused for a while and said patiently, "God! All this is beyond my tolerance. I can't see my daughter like this. God have mercy on us! Take us to heaven! The serious condition of Seharzada, Amara, Razia Begum was in his attention from the sight of this dreamy body.
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Amara's answer enlightened his fourteen classes. His eyes full of hatred were staring at me. Babaji was still adamant about his decision. Razia Begum said, "This time we will face them firmly. So that next time, my friend, these people will not be able to divert you from your goal". Amara said, "Dad, what have we done to you? As long as my father was alive, you had no problem with my education. Now as I am getting closer to my destination, why are you taking me away? It is better that we die with our father." His words surprised even Babaji.
He was also forced to think. A coldness settled on his mind. As he was the eldest in the family, it was unbearable for him that we should bring any decision before him. Amara said, "You cannot take away my right from me under any circumstances". Babaji's eyes were red with anger. He picked up his turban and took his way from there. He must have felt bad going like this, but it was the right time to make a decision. Razia Begum took out the paid Bhai kept and placed it on her daughter's hand and said, "Daughter, my prayers are always with you. I will fully support you and your father's dream to come true."
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For protection, Razia Begum wrapped a surah Mubaraka(A sacred thing) in a handkerchief and tied it to the stem of the Amara. Stepping into the steaming kitchen, Razia Begum asked Babaji for hot tea. Babaji's character provided joy. After a long and difficult two years, Amara was on the way to success. In this matter, Razia Begum's life was filled with happiness. Razia Begum heard Babaji who had woken up in shock. That He too was getting better. .
It was untold story of an orphan girl who strive for her rights. Untill he is succeeded to achieve her goals. Morally lesson of my story is that there is nothing impossible in this world. We can achieve everything but for this we must have to pay out attention and time to our goals. When we will be passionate then ultimately we will get rewards. Because it's promise of God , there is nothing besides what a man try for. Our positive attitude always gives us a better direction toward success. I'm sure you will appreciate my creativity. I'm going to wind up with this quite of Albert Einstein;
"Try not to become a man of success, but rather try to become a man of value."
Thank you so much to all of you. I would like to invite @stef1 , @patjewell , @wilmer1988 , @lavanyalakshman , @f2i5 , @harferri @ngoenyi , @suboohi to take part in this contest and share your creativity with us. Because creativity has no limit.
With Best Regards,
Aalia Rubab
Thank you, friend!
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Thank you so much mam ♥️
Hello My Friend @aaliarubab! That was an amazing story of Amara, who was determined to break through the patriarchal system and prove her worth. It was amazing how she used her education and knowledge to make a statement and fight for her rights. The story was inspiring and it shows how one can stand up for their rights, no matter the situation.
The story was well written and the characters were well developed. The setting was well described and it was easy to imagine the scene. The plot was well thought out and the story was engaging. The moral of the story was clear, that no matter how difficult the situation may be, one should never give up on their dreams. This is a great message to all of us, to never give up on our goals and to strive for success.
Regards, @fabiha
Assalam-o-Alaikum @fabiha...Indeed, it's not a story of a single girl. This girl is actually representing our today's society. Still there are many girls who are not getting education because being an obedient girl of parents they have to leave from education. I'm mentioning only education because through education we can learn a lot. For example through education we know how to speak , how to do , how to write , how to argue with others. All these things are only learn through the education.
Because through books we travel all over the world. Even decades! Indeed ! Absolute right one should not give up. Because success is the thing that is possible. It is possible through our hard work. Hard work always pays off.
Thank you so much for your compliment.
Good luck to you !
Walaikum Assalam @aaliarubab Yes, you're right. The story of Amara represents the struggles and challenges faced by many girls and women around the world. However, her determination and persistence serve as an inspiration to us all, reminding us that we have the power to overcome obstacles and achieve our goals with hard work and dedication. Thank you for bringing this important message to light.
Good Luck to you As Well.
Regards, @fabiha
Thank you mam 💕
@aaliarubab Exactly, the story highlights the importance of never giving up and continuously working towards one's dreams, even in the face of adversity. The orphan girl serves as a reminder that with hard work and determination, one can overcome any obstacle and achieve their goals. The moral lesson is that anything is possible if you believe in yourself and are willing to put in the effort required to succeed.
I put my little efforts to make this post more worthy. Thank you very much for your conpliment. Best wishes for you.
I like your story.Its very difficult for everyone to face such hardships when a person is not independent and can't take his or her life dicisions own his own and there should be no gender discrimination and I think girls and boys are equal and there should be equal importance for both of them.
Overall I like and enjoy your writing
Thank you very much for your feedback. It is pleasure for me if you liked it more informatiove and interesting.
You have shared a very beautiful story. Actually, if the head of the family i.e. the father is not there, then every member of the family has to suffer a lot. Society considers them as lower class people. How do you want to do all kinds of work for the family? Similarly, wealth is tied to the house, but love the family more, there is more love for the family. Thank you so much for sharing a beautiful story! Good luck
Thank you so much for your feedback.
You have shared a very beautiful story. Actually, if the head of the family i.e. the father is not there, then every member of the family has to suffer a lot. Society considers them as lower class people. How do you want to do all kinds of work for the family? Similarly, wealth is tied to the house, but love the family more, there is more love for the family. Thank you so much for sharing a beautiful story! Good luck
Yes , our first priority is our family. For the freedom of family , the right path is along education in a true sense. Thank you for your compliment.
Welcome
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And this is exactly what you have done. Well done!
There are plenty of women all over the world that can relate to your story. How I wish for them all to read your post.
Nothing is impossible! These are such wish words.
Wishing you all the best for the contest.
PS: Thanks for the invite!
Thank you very much for your compliment.