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RE: "HWC-story01"

in Hindwhale Communitylast year

Hello respected @senehasa

I liked your story, Rohan and Roshan are twin brothers. Initially I was not able to understand who is right and who is wrong, because in the second line of the story you have written that Rohan was a cunning person and lived on other people's money. But after reading the whole story I came to know that Roshan was the wrong person. Anyway you have expressed the dialogues well. Roshan's saying when the police handcuffs him >
"I just wanted a better life." shows his disappointment and frustration.

But bad is bad.

Thank you for sending a beautiful story.

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Rohan is a good man, and Roshan is a cunning man who acted as Rohan and tried to possess all his wealth. That was in my mind. Sorry for any inconvience.

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