Hello dear @myani10, you need to cover the following areas in your introduction :

Your name and age
A country where you reside now
Your area of work or your study
Your experience with crypto
Your hobby and passion, dislike
What sort of posts written by others are you looking for
What sort of posts do you think you'll be creating (these can change, so don't feel locked in.)
How you found Steemit and what you hope to accomplish here.

Note correct the date in your steemit picture. It should be the date of your introduction.

Also use the following tags for this achievement :
#achievement1 #newcomer #introduceyourself #steemexclusive #yourcountry