Hi @eshy, I'm delightful to read your achievement 1 verification post, you're welcome to the steemit platform where money is made by putting word in actions.

What is it you see (the entire post and pictures)

@eshy has made a very brief introduction post about herself, I've seen that she's a Pakistan, she lives in okara and she's 19 years old. Her first picture indicate the school she's currently attending now and the second picture have indicate that she's a pre medical student.

What is it you feel

I feel excited reading her post just like her feeling excited to introduce herself to us. Depending on her hubbies, I can feel that she's fun and lovely to spend time with.

What is it you like and what can be improved

I like how she briefly explained herself without going off point, her post is simple and easy to understand. In terms of improvement, she needs a markdown style to bring out the beauty of her post. Hi @eshy, this post will guide you on how to apply markdown style.

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So @eshy, what types of posts will you be publishing in the steemit platform?

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