This is a nice introductory post.
you are welcome to this great platform #steemit.

But you are missing a vital part of it .
you need to do a write up on a plain sheet of paper snap with it and then do your write up and post along side with it.

WRITE ON A PAPER LIKE THIS

check
https://steemit.com/hive-172186/@pubglover/achievement-1-introduction-through-verification-by-pubglover
see how it is done.