Really nice poem, you have a great ability to express an idea with very few words, unfortunately, I'm very far from this but with practice maybe one day I will also be able to create short poems, which can say more than what a thousand words could say.
Thank you for those kind words!
Whenever I begin to think something of mine is almost done, my final step is to take a bunch out. Last week I cut a 1000 word story down to under 500!