I love it! It's a great piece, the story, the words, the images you describe. And yes, I love the fact that you did not stick to the rules (Freestyle works for me too most of the time and whenever I tried to work on specific form - for contests - I kept trying and trying until I could "abide by the rules". It certainly spoils the enjoyment of spontaneous inspiration, but it's a great exercise).

I will say it again, this is a lovely piece! Good luck with the contest!! 🤗