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RE: This is grief?

in The Ink Well • 4 years ago

So many wonderful images in this poem Osahon.

I really like the way you create mood in this poem. Sublime!

The stream wakes and regurgitated the dream,
The flowers wilt into knots of pebbles
Polished in the star's wink.

I love this imagery of the flower like knots of pebbles!

Beautiful.

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    Thank you Rowan. I am hoping that my writing is improving. Thank God for steemit.

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