Steemitphilippines Community Contest Week 4 - Theme: Black and White Photography-09/15/21- "Cobwebs of the Past"

in Steemit Philippines3 years ago

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I stared at this portrait which was intricately made by my eldest son, with so much intent. I followed the lines where they led. Ah, ballpen drawing is hard to do guys because errors cannot be erased or maybe you can pretend to add more scribbles as a cover up.

Spiderman was drawn by my eldest son before he met that fortuitous tragedy which had tremendously changed his life. The drawing imprint the muscles depicting that of a strong willed fighter. His stance describes that of a cat with a lightweight drop, a strong semblance of a man with years of training in his chosen field of passion: To defend the less fortunate and the oppressed!

This means that a drawing describe the personality of the author himself. More often than not, we tend to draw the things that is close to our hearts. Such vivid description is transferred to the lid of the ballpoint from the central system of the artist with intensity thereby creating a marvelous drawing.

Flashback

With all of the above description, the pulse could no longer connect with the mind because the nerves that transcend to both the painter and the canvas was curtailed with a wink of an eye due to the devil's work in form of liquor. My friends, my brother-in-law forced my son to go with him in his car to go downtown even if he was heavily drunk already. I tried to warn him but he said that he will look after his uncle for fear that he will be out of control along the way. And speaking of the devil, a glaring light blinded the driver that he (my brother-in-law) didn't noticed a truck heavily loaded with sugarcane along the highway that had a blown up tire right at that moment which forced them to standstill. Unfortunately, my brother-in-law bumped on the truck before they could place a warning device.

It happened so fast. The protective device at the back of the driver's seat burst due to the strong impact. It was good enough that my son wasn't asleep yet (it was almost midnight) that he had covered his face which fractured his arms. Their cousin who was fast asleep at the back seat lost his elbow!

Despite of this, he pulled them out from the car without knowing that he had a broken arm. The Strada model was a heavy-duty car but the front was smashed straight along with the two doors both on the front and back side. My brother-in-law had a dislodged spinal bone on the 4th and fifth column. That was the end of my son's career. That was supposed to be his last term in his Nautical Science course. He had a titanium plate attached to his right arm, he couldn't even carry his arms normally within 3-years time. Such a waste my dear friends. My son had lost his dream for a brighter future and the worst, his girlfriend married another seaman. Shame on her! But we were there for him, guiding him to move on for the better. But fate was not at his side. He died at the age of 32 due to cardiac arrest. It ‘broke my heart...

And now as I look at his drawing again, it was as if a whole book of novel was written all over Spiderman! His memories came pouring back to my grieving heart. Missing you so much anak ko!

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 3 years ago 
CriteriaScore 0-10
Relevance to the Theme.9
Creativity.9
Technique.9
Overall impact.9
Story.9
Total score.9
 3 years ago 

Thank you!

 3 years ago 

Hmm what a lost, Sis... Sakit gyud yan palandungon. Buti you are a strong woman. Nakaya mo ra tanan.

 3 years ago (edited)

I had to sis because I still have my kids who needed me most. My heart is still in grief though but that's life. We are not in control of our lives. Thanks sis. Baka maiyak pa ako ha.

 3 years ago 
Judge: @loloy2020
CategoryDetails (✅/❌)
Theme: Black and White Photography
Fully Verified
Correct Title and Tags
Used the #steemexclusive tag
1 Photo per Entry
Mentioned 3 Friends
Write-ups RatingGood
Criteria for JudgingRatings/Score)
1. Relevance to the theme9.2
2. Creativity9
3. Technique9
4. Overall impact9.3
5. Quality of story9.3
Total Ratings/Score9.2
 3 years ago 

Yay, maraming salamat po!

 3 years ago 

Hello po,

Maraming salamat sa pagsalit sa ating Photography Contest Week 4.

Sana ay masaya ka dito sa ating Community at maging aktibo pa po kayo sa pagbahagi nang iyong mga posts.

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God Bless po!!!

 3 years ago 

Sakita dam oi... I know he is already in good hands dam...

 3 years ago 

Paita pa sa panyawan dam. Gamay pa iya bata when he died (grade1) now he's already 14, grade 9 na tawon.

 3 years ago 

mao ba? Taud2 na diay... So sad

 3 years ago 

Oo. At least may naiwan syang anak at matalino katulad nya. Binibisita naman Ako pag may time. Teacher din mama nya kka-promote lang din.

 3 years ago 

ah ok po...

 3 years ago 

Sumikip dibdib ko habang nagbabasa. I think I couldnt be as strong as you are

 3 years ago 

Kailangan magpakatatag para na din sa mga bata g kapatid...:(
Salamat sa pagbabasa.

 3 years ago 

Nakakaiyak po mhie. Pero nasa mabuting lugar na siya kay God. Napakabata pa nga.

@sarimanok
Relevance / Adherence to the theme: Black and White Photography - Current Events
30%
Score: 93% 27.9

Visual Impact

The distinctiveness of the photo if a person would actually take a second glance of it and how it stands out from the rest.
30%
Score: 95% 28.5

Photo Quality and Composition:

This applies the basic rules in photography. Subject, background, clarity, sharpness, technique, rule of thirds, etc.
40%
Score: 90% 36

Total Score: 9.24

 3 years ago 

Thank you!

 3 years ago 

Oh my God, grabe tlaga ang pagsubok sa buhay.. Ok lang sizt

 3 years ago 

Proverbs 16:4 – “The LORD has made everything for its purpose..."

God allows things to happen for a reason. I know He heals the broken hearted and wipe every tear from their eyes.

Ang galing ng drawing nasa dugo nyo pala ang ang pagiging artist.

 3 years ago 

Masakit mawalan ng anak pero tama Ka kaibigan nasa Kanya ang lahat na Ito at wala nang sakit na maramdaman.

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 3 years ago 

a very sad life story Ate. I can't imagine the pain you and your family went through because of the accident.

virtual hugs Ate.

 3 years ago 

Salamat day. Napakahirap pero ganon talaga.

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