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RE: Choices! What will it be? #37

in Steem For Ladies9 months ago

A nice choice you've made, and your right this month is full of festivities and lots of fun..

However, I suggest applying paragraphs to your very beautiful work would make it more outstanding.

Take for example this part of your post;

"Around this day, Christians organize many fairs, mainly after December; everyone makes plans for this day in advance and organizes various festivals to make this day exciting and sweet in memory. Celebrated. The main attraction of the day is Santa Claus. The joy of this day is doubled through Santa Claus, and all the children expect different gifts from Santa Claus. It is a part of their followers, and it has become a rule now that whatever Santa Claus is, he should be ready to give and receive gifts from him, especially children who are thrilled, and the joy of this day is doubled. They also love to celebrate this day, and on this day, we organize special college events and picnics. We also spent this day organizing various events. Because this day is a public holiday in Bangladesh, different people come back to their homes from"...

It would be more beautiful if you added paragraphs, like this

Around this day, Christians organize many fairs, mainly after December; everyone makes plans for this day in advance and organizes various festivals to make this day exciting and sweet in memory. Celebrated.

The main attraction of the day is Santa Claus. The joy of this day is doubled through Santa Claus, and all the children expect different gifts from Santa Claus.

It is a part of their followers, and it has become a rule now that whatever Santa Claus is, he should be ready to give and receive gifts from him, especially children who are thrilled, and the joy of this day is doubled.

They also love to celebrate this day, and on this day, we organize special college events and picnics. We also spent this day organizing various events. Because this day is a public holiday in Bangladesh, different people come back to their homes from...

This makes it more easier and fun to read, your amazing write up.

Thanks for making the choice to write. Love ya
Adiós

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