Good morning!

I want to stand still at your post this morning.
You wrote such a nice post, great imagination. And yes, you have great potential.
What I want you to do is to check your post with a tool like Grammarly.com before you post.
Take a look at the following clip from your post;

Now if you can eliminate grammar, spelling, and punctuation mistakes you will have a great post!
I know you can do it!

I am also sharing a post that can help you going forward.
https://steemit.com/hive-153970/@patjewell/the-5-main-reasons-why-posts-goes-wrong

Good luck!