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RE: Choices! What will it be? #52
This is exactly how it happens.. people scattered at work, schools, shopping malls, etc. Dark clouds rolling in... damage... death.. destruction... working together... rebuilding.
Thank you for sharing your story with us.
Good luck with the contest!
Thanks for the comment dear
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Good morning!
I want to stand still at your post this morning.
You wrote such a nice post, great imagination. And yes, you have great potential.
What I want you to do is to check your post with a tool like Grammarly.com before you post.
Take a look at the following clip from your post;
Now if you can eliminate grammar, spelling, and punctuation mistakes you will have a great post!
I know you can do it!
I am also sharing a post that can help you going forward.
https://steemit.com/hive-153970/@patjewell/the-5-main-reasons-why-posts-goes-wrong
Good luck!