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RE: Prowriters hub week 004|Technology in our lives - banking services enhanced by modern technology by @emmanu

in SteemAlive2 years ago

You have done well to juxtapose the traditional means of saving to the bank system. The traditional method leads to loss of money via stealing since the money is hidden under carpet, in a wooden safe, or even buried in the ground.

In this modern days, banks have made it safer, made transactions easier and helped users to transfer funds across the world.

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 2 years ago 

Saving money before the invention of modern Banking services was really a risk because thiefs can access your money any time and any day

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 2 years ago 

In this modern days, banks have made it safer, made transactions easier and helped users to transfer funds across the world.

We can now transfer money across the world easier and faster onlike before that one will pass through difficult procedures and all this are possible through the help of technology

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