SteemAlive presents ProWritersHub(W6). Creative Writing.Every thing that glitters ate not gold. An Imaginary story.
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Introduction
I want talk on this topic that says all that glitters are not gold. I will be using an Imaginary story to describe this topic.
Everything that glitters is gold
There is a girl named Chiamaka. She is beautiful, calm damsel . She is loved by every one. Chiamaka always come first in school that made even the teachers and students to love her the more. So after secondary school education she made all her papers and was set to write her JAMB. When it was time for the JAMb the father droped her to in center and waved Good bye to her and wished her success, after the examination she came out in flying colours and was given admission to study medicine and surgery in the university. She started and was doing very well. Chiamaka who was from a religious family joined their family church campus followship and was given the position of the leader because of her commitment and dedication. There is no day she will not be the first to be at the followship center for worship and if paraventure a member is abesent she will organize a visit to the persons house this continued untill oneday.
Chiamaka in Trouble
Oneday one of the brother in the followship named Joel started lookig for chiamaka for friendship. This brother is so wealthy. He is the talk of the campus because of his extravagant life. He keep coming to sister chiamaka's house showering her with expensive gifts and chiamaka will receive with thanks as brother concern but this brother did let his intentions known to chiamaka. On chiamakas birthday he gave her the most expensive ring as an engagement ring. Chiamaka accepted. This brother graduated and left for his NYSC. He keep on calling chiamaka. Until he stopped caring and calling. this attitude made chiamaka to plan a visit to his place. Chiamaka got to this her friends place and she was welcomed he asked her to sleep over let them iron things out. That night was a night of regret to chiamaka as she lost her glory and pride as a woman. Long story cut short she decided to do abortion and that affected her womb she bleeded and almost lost her life and the brother lost and was no where to be found. And chiamaka did not want to tell anybody because it will be very shameful thing to be told by her.
Brother Joel
Brother Joel relocated, changed his phone number. Finished his NYSC and got married to another woman. Leaving Chiamaka to suffer alone without any help. But he did not go free there was no issue in his marriage. I mean no child. By then amaka was declared missing by the parents and friends. Untill chiamaka was able to surmorn courage and called one of her friend and told her everything the girl came and paid for chiamaka hospital bill and took her home.
Finally. Brother Joel life shattered and he was not even seeing food to eat wondering about like mad man untill a pastor prayed for him and asked him to look for amaka and ask for forgiveness. But then Chiamaka has been blessed with a good man and a baby. She forgave Joel and every turn out well again for him.
Conclusion
Chiamaka did not ask well and check brother joels intentions she was carried away with expensive gifts that landed her in apainful situation of regrets. Let us know that all that glitters are not Gold. Thanks.
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This story is actually pathetic but teaches an important lesson
Chiamaka was carried away by the expensive gifts she got from Joel and she didn't know that he haboured harmful thoughts towards her.
Asin eeh. Some girl can be easily carried away.
If not that you said it is an imaginary story. It looks real. Thank God I didn't cry out of emotion toward Chiamaka.
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Change it to your own words
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What a heart touching story!!
Honestly, all that glitters are not gold. Before accepting gifts from a so called man, or woman, one should be extremely careful. More to that, do you know that, the reason why things turned out red color for Chiamaka is because she accepted to sleep over in Joel's house? My dear, we need to be careful ooo
Yes. But i dont blame her. Because Joel has never molested her before. So she felt it will be the same.
Wow your story touches the heart, not everyone you see is good a person we need to pray for good people to come by our sides
Beautiful stories.
Chiamaka represents a naive girl who is carried away by erotic feelings for a man who later jilts her for another woman. No one can blame her for her mistake since she was only a victim of circumstance. It is nice that nature took compassion on her and blessed her with a fruitful home. But it's also heartbreaking that karma caught up with Brother Joel.
Both males and females should learn from this. Not all romantic prospects come with good intentions. Some just want to exploit others and then move on.
All that glitters is not gold.
Seriously, she was carried away. We gat a lot to learn from this.