Your writings are quite okay, but you just need so set your first photo as a land scape...
You also need to make an Introduction
Which is to tell us what the story will look like.. and you also need to complete it with a conclusion. And indicate bus like ...
Its interesting to read your stort. But the truth is that am unable to understand it all. Please next time, i think it will be good to include an introduction. That will help us to understand its direction. @estyroberts, am looking forward to read more stories from you
Greetings @estyroberts
Your post is well information and what is outstanding, is the story
Sorry to say, please I lost understanding due to laymanship skills.
Thank you for sharing your story with us, hoping to read through your next chapter
What a lovely day you gat my dear friend.
Your writings are quite okay, but you just need so set your first photo as a land scape...
You also need to make an Introduction
Which is to tell us what the story will look like.. and you also need to complete it with a conclusion. And indicate bus like ...
Impressive short story. I know its a developing story and cant wait for the next chapter. But your creativity and use of school setting is good.
Note: Please next time, use landscape image for your thumbnail, and not portrait. Check out this post below for the correct use of images:
Image Content Etiquette: How to manage images correctly and make your posts look great.
Ok, thank you for reading, I’ll definitely use the landscape in my next post.
@estyroberts this is a good shot story, can't wait to read the full story, take care.
Thanks for reading.
Thanks very much
Very nice and creative story
I can't wait to know about the new student
I so much enjoyed the story.
You can continue to drop stories like this for us
Thanks for sharing @estyroberts
Thanks for reading.
@estyroberts Thank you for producing original content on Steemit.You have got an interesting story here a.s I hope to read from you next time.
Thank you.
Nice article, great storyline and I'm keeping my eyes open for the proceeding chapters.
Its interesting to read your stort. But the truth is that am unable to understand it all. Please next time, i think it will be good to include an introduction. That will help us to understand its direction. @estyroberts, am looking forward to read more stories from you
Very interesting and short @estyrobert57, cant wait for the next chapter. Well done dear.
Thanks for reading.
Greetings @estyroberts
Your post is well information and what is outstanding, is the story
Sorry to say, please I lost understanding due to laymanship skills.
Thank you for sharing your story with us, hoping to read through your next chapter
Thanks for reading.
You are welcome 🤗 dear