Hello friend I am happy to read your post indeed interesting and it gives me the taste to drink wood apple fruit.

But friend let us revise your post again and ameliorate it.

You used too many hashtags in your post. Try as much as possible to reduce it in your future posts. I understand you want your post to be attractive 😜 but reduce it dear.

Your format also need to be revised.
Also when you mentione too many users in your post they don't get notified so in future you can do that in the comments section of you post.

Friend I'll be waiting to read more of your post.

To give you more hint you can verify the way I do my posts and get inspiration from there (not only mine) for we learn everyday.

Thank you for your write up friend @dilums