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RE: El festín vino después •The feast came after

in Freewriters • 21 hours ago

Dear friend,

I enjoyed your story and you did everything right except for the word count but I am sure you can practise that yourself. Tip: if you delete the first and last part you are close to 100 words and the essence of the your story doesn't really change.

My compliment to you and happy writing

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