CONTEST | Write A Script - Out Of The Box
TITLE: "The Mosquito-Repellent Masterstroke"
GENRE: Comedy
DURATION: 3 minutes
INT. ADVERTISING AGENCY OFFICE - DAY
A small office cluttered with papers, advertising posters, and post-it notes scattered everywhere. GIANNI, a young intern, is sitting at the desk with his head in his hands. He is surrounded by a thousand thoughts and papers full of notes. A clock ticks loudly on the wall.
GIANNI
(thoughtful, to himself)
I need to find the perfect idea... something new, something fresh. A fun way to say that this spray keeps mosquitoes away... and that it's all natural. I have to come up with something that makes people laugh... something entertaining...
Gianni gets up from the desk and paces back and forth across the room.
GIANNI
(agitated)
Nothing. Still nothing. Maybe if I go out and get some fresh air...
EXT. METROPOLITAN BEACH BAR - EVENING
A small kiosk on a busy street. The air is hot and muggy. Gianni approaches the counter, visibly tired. He orders a sandwich and a cold drink. He sits at a plastic table, trying to clear his mind.
GIANNI
(talking to himself)
Maybe with a full stomach, I'll come up with an idea... something that can make people laugh, something memorable. An ad has to be fun to be remembered...
While eating, he tries to distract himself by talking about trivial things, but mosquitoes start buzzing around him.
GIANNI
(annoyed, slapping himself)
Damn mosquitoes! There's no escape, not even here...
Gianni continues slapping his arms and legs. The kiosk's radio starts playing a classic Tyrolean song, the one where Tyroleans slap each other in rhythm with the music. Gianni looks up, confused but amused.
At that moment, he sees another person at a nearby table doing the same thing: trying to swat mosquitoes while the music plays in the background. They look into each other's eyes and start laughing.
GIANNI
(laughing out loud)
Of course! That's perfect!
Gianni grabs his phone and calls his creative director, all excited.
GIANNI
(on the phone)
Yes, hello! I've got the idea! Imagine two Tyroleans dancing in a field. Instead of slapping each other in rhythm with the music, they're slapping away mosquitoes! And then... BAM! Our spray saves them all!
From the other end of the line, we hear a laugh of approval.
DIRECTOR'S VOICE
(on the phone)
"Brilliant, Gianni! I love it! Come back to the office right away; we need to write this! I already have the treatment in mind."
Thanks for reading @ibesso
No dudo que las mejores ideas para los publicistas, escritores, músicos...están fuera de la presión que genera la oficina.
Me resultó muy divertido tu guión.
Sí, la metáfora de pensar “out of the box” inspiró a Gianni a salir de la oficina 🤣
¡Gracias! Me alegra que te hayas divertido
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I l♥️ve it but I wish they wouldn't use that spray! The natural way is more funny. Did you finish your poster tonight Gianni 🤔 Do you live at the office?
It makes agreat reas! 🍀
🤣 We could let them slap each other for a few minutes, increase the speed, and promote an ointment for bruises 🤣 Thanks, Kitty! I'm glad you liked it.
The poster is ready.
It looks great although it is an Austrian brand 🤔 let me place an order I hope they also fight stable flies!
It must be global warming melting the glaciers of the Brenner Pass—though the delivery will probably arrive sooner!
It doesn't look as if they care, they even started a Beach Bar. It's clear all one needs is creativity Ointment for bruises it is. You can send me 12 bottles of 1 litre (better a bit more since the prices go up and world war 3 is only a few kilometres away..make it 24 if not needed I will sell it in small bottles of 15 ml.
Your upselling strategy is interesting; I really hope it won't be necessary. However, you can always return the items at no cost if things improve.
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Good luck to you.🐞
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Thank you very much!
We love it. You wrote a great freewrite (script).
Happy writing and a great weekend.
Thank you so much, @freewritehouse! I'm glad you enjoyed my script. Your support means a lot. Wishing you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration!
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