Witsbillykeed (65)in Freewriters • 5 years ago The world will drown The stars flame out Life breaks love Hearts beat hollow You cringe and quake The sound of exit was never ever so deafening So hard to keep your wits about you But you better keep your wits about you #poetry
Yes you better. I like this poem. I feel desperation, but with a will to fight. the sound of exit was never ever so deafening. Good stuff!
I also thought that was poignant
Thanks :)