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RE: My Travel Diary

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It would help if you do not keep repeating yourself to improve your text. It reads as if you have no idea why you travelled except for meeting with your brother. How to experience a different "culture" in a big city where your brother moved to?

You must be extremely lucky to bump into that wedding. 🤔 The bride price sounds like a very good idea.


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Thanks for reviewing my post
I will try to stop repeating text when am writing.
Thanks so much for this correction

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