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RE: [MY LOCAL NEWS] Kabupaten Aceh Utara/ Indonesia- Pelaksanaan Meugang (punggahan) Menyambut Bulan Ramadhan di Kabupaten Aceh Utara
Thank you for taking part in the My Local News challenge.
Maybe try breaking the article up into shorter, more streamlined paragraphs to improve its ease of reading as a news story.
Thank you very much sir. I get a lot of input from you for the perfection of my articles in the future....thank you...🙏