Hi, friend,
Please don't mention anyone if it's not important because your post can become spam.
There are several points that you need to pay attention to so far

• take your own picture with original and good selfie angle or you can see this post
  The 5 main reasons why posts go wrong
• as much as possible avoid taking sources on the internet if it is something you usually do because we will prefer to read sources on the internet that are clearer
• I see progress from the markdownstyle you use and that's good, but don't ever stop to read and interact with other steemian often
• each type of post has its own tag that will help you to get a big voice. (I have told you before)

Hopefully this can help you get what you want in steemit, there are many spies around you, so you are never alone here.