Poetry contest by @dobartim II entry by @sadiaanyat
Free Your Soul
Let’s go On the top of mountain
To see the world from so high
Let’s take a deep breath there
Let’s forget our worries for a while
you may look normal but deep down
Your heart is shivering, water is in your eye
Do you see the freedom of fish
I want to go deep to see the sea from inside
Stop passing the complements on others
Why you so black, so you so shy
If nothing is left for you in this world
Imagine the divine, have a peaceful flight
Don't take much burden of world' worries
Free your soul for a while
Be silent and let them to rule you because
At the end of the day, we all will die
I do this most evenings when I go for a walk. There is this peace that nature's serenity offers. I bet you have experienced the same @sadiaanyat, for your poem reveals emotions, as you really wrote them from your heart.
I love poetry. I think more you deeper you will write, more effective it will be