' WEEKLY CONTEST WEEK 3 - Poetry Game - Day 6 ' - '' On Deep Thoughts ''
''WEEKLY CONTEST WEEK 3 - Poetry Game - Day 6 '' - '' On Deep Thoughts ''
Hello dear friends, if there are mistakes in the poem, I will be glad if you write your criticism for this, even if I do not have full command of English, this should not be an obstacle for us to learn :))
Deep Thoughts
The things that scream,
As I fly through deep air.
The things that scream,
In the deep silence of nothing.
My soul is looking for itself;
When above the deep clouds
My hands are faltering in emptiness
As we distance between us and God...
The things that scream,
As I fly through deep air.
The things that scream,
In the deep silence of nothing.
My soul contradicts itself; I do not realize,
Because if I am someone with countless souls.
If my soul doesn't think with my mind,
My soul is only because it feels.
The things that scream,
As I fly through deep air.
The things that scream,
In the deep silence of nothing.
I have a lot of things inside,
It's crazy how I feel if you only knew.
If I am the entity that cannot be felt...
Could it ever matter?
The things that scream,
As I fly through deep air.
The things that scream,
In the deep silence of nothing.
ꕤ footnote: Thank you for reading my poem. Also, if you are going to use poems and photographs, I would be very glad if you show me as the source. Yours truly. @pygmalion34
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very nice!
Thank you sir :))
thank you! i like this
you're welcome sir :))
Good post.
thank you sir, with my respect and love :))