WEEKLY CONTEST - Poetry Game - Day 1 -
This is my first participation for the WEEKLY CONTEST - Poetry Game - Day 1 - propopuesto by @dobartim. And it is also a personal challenge, because I usually write poetry in Spanish, but not in English. So I'm trying, and I'll leave you also, at the end, the Spanish version. I helped myself with the google translate and some knowledge of English, but as for the versification, I want to learn! Today I tried a formality-free poem today, because it suits my little knowledge about hyphenation better.
In advance, I apologize for mistakes.
Fuente (https://pixabay.com/es/photos/rose-rosa-de-invierno-flor-bloom-3142660/)
My rose is dying
The cold air whips my skin
it hurts me
the pain is greater in my heart
because I'm alone
without your Love
without your warmth on my skin.
I want to know
if you come back to me
if my life will return to you
if your heat will return
to my skin
my essential love
The winter rose died
the cold turned it off
Will it be the same with my love?
the distance without words
it breaks my heart
did you forget me, love?
The wind brings whispers
roars sometimes
but you remain mute
your absence hurts
your silence hurts
my rose is dying
Fuente (ttps://pixabay.com/es/photos/rose-flor-p%C3%A9talo-el-amor-florales-3142529/)
Versión en español
El aire frio azota mi piel
me lastima
el dolor es mayor en mi corazon
Porque estoy solo
sin tu amor
sin tu calor en mi piel
quiero saber
si vuelves a mi
si mi vida volverá a ti
si tu calor volverá
a mi piel
mi amor esencial
La rosa de invierno murió
el frio lo apago
¿Será igual con mi amor?
la distancia sin palabras
me rompe el corazón
me olvidaste amor
El viento trae susurros
ruge a veces
pero te quedas mudo
tu ausencia duele
tu silencio duele
mi rosa esta muriendo
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WEEKLY CONTEST - Poetry Game - Day 1.
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Thanks for reading and commenting
Hola querida amiga @mllg buenas tardes
hermosa composición , admiro a las personas que saben escribir poesías
aprovecho para desearte una esplendida tarde
Muchas graacias por tus siempre animosas palabras, apreciado @jlufer.
Muy amable de tu parte.
Feliz mes de marzo
Beautifully composed poem. Sad but very well delivered.
Thanks for the feedback, @ablaze
wuao amiga que lindo poema. En el hay algo de melancolia.
Un abrazo.
Gracias por tu apoyo, amiga.
Sí, hay melancolía y amor.
Me encanta que te haya gustado!!