Quatrain Poetry: I'm Hurt But I'm Fine

in Steem Schools3 years ago (edited)


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𝐼'𝑚 ℎ𝑢𝑟𝑡 𝑏𝑢𝑡 𝐼 𝑎𝑚 𝑓𝑖𝑛𝑒, 𝑏𝑎𝑑 𝑡ℎ𝑖𝑛𝑔𝑠 𝑤𝑎𝑛𝑡 𝑡𝑜 𝑠𝑡𝑖𝑐𝑘 𝑡𝑜 𝑚𝑒 𝑙𝑖𝑘𝑒 𝑑𝑖𝑟𝑡 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑔𝑟𝑖𝑚𝑒.
𝐴𝑙𝑙 𝑚𝑦 𝑝𝑎𝑖𝑛𝑠 𝑎𝑟𝑒 𝑤𝑜𝑟𝑡ℎ 𝑐𝑜𝑛𝑠𝑖𝑑𝑒𝑟𝑖𝑛𝑔 𝑏𝑢𝑡 𝑎𝑙𝑙 𝑜𝑓 𝑖𝑡 𝑎𝑟𝑒 𝑛𝑜𝑡 𝑤𝑜𝑟𝑡ℎ 𝑚𝑦 𝑤𝑒𝑒𝑝𝑖𝑛𝑔.
𝐻𝑎𝑙𝑓 𝑜𝑓 𝑚𝑦 𝑙𝑖𝑓𝑒𝑡𝑖𝑚𝑒 𝑎𝑟𝑒 𝑗𝑢𝑠𝑡 𝑙𝑖𝑘𝑒 𝑤𝑎𝑖𝑡𝑖𝑛𝑔, 𝑤𝑎𝑖𝑡𝑖𝑛𝑔 𝑓𝑜𝑟 𝑎 𝑛𝑒𝑒𝑑𝑒𝑑 𝑙𝑖𝑓𝑒𝑙𝑖𝑛𝑒.
𝑈𝑛𝑡𝑖𝑙 𝑚𝑦 𝑡𝑖𝑚𝑒 𝑎𝑟𝑒 𝑎𝑙𝑙 𝑐𝑜𝑛𝑠𝑢𝑚𝑒𝑑-𝑢𝑝 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑖𝑡 𝑖𝑠 𝑎 𝑟𝑒𝑎𝑠𝑜𝑛 𝑓𝑜𝑟 𝑚𝑒 𝑡𝑜 𝑤ℎ𝑖𝑛𝑒.

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𝐺𝑜𝑑 𝑖𝑠 𝑖𝑛𝑑𝑒𝑒𝑑 𝑔𝑜𝑜𝑑 𝑎𝑙𝑙 𝑡ℎ𝑒 𝑡𝑖𝑚𝑒 𝑏𝑒𝑐𝑎𝑢𝑠𝑒 𝑚𝑦 𝑙𝑎𝑏 𝑟𝑒𝑠𝑢𝑙𝑡𝑠 𝑡𝑜𝑙𝑑 𝑚𝑒 𝑡ℎ𝑎𝑡 𝐼'𝑚 𝑓𝑖𝑛𝑒.
𝑇ℎ𝑒 𝐶𝑖𝑛𝑎𝑐𝑎𝑙𝑐𝑒𝑡 𝑡ℎ𝑎𝑡 𝐼 𝑤𝑎𝑠 𝑡𝑎𝑘𝑖𝑛𝑔 𝐼 𝑝𝑎𝑢𝑠𝑒𝑑 𝑓𝑜𝑟 𝑎 𝑤ℎ𝑖𝑙𝑒 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝐼 𝑎𝑚 𝑛𝑜𝑤 ℎ𝑜𝑝𝑖𝑛𝑔 𝑡ℎ𝑎𝑡 𝑚𝑦 𝑖𝑃𝑇𝐻 𝑤𝑜𝑢𝑙𝑑 𝑛𝑜𝑡 𝑐𝑙𝑖𝑚𝑏.
𝑀𝑦 𝑏𝑟𝑖𝑡𝑡𝑙𝑒 𝑏𝑜𝑛𝑒𝑠 𝑎𝑟𝑒 𝑙𝑖𝑘𝑒 𝑏𝑖𝑠𝑐𝑢𝑖𝑡𝑠, 𝑠𝑐𝑜𝑛𝑒𝑠 𝑏𝑢𝑡 𝐼 𝑓𝑒𝑒𝑑 𝑡ℎ𝑒𝑚 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑡ℎ𝑒𝑦 𝑔𝑒𝑡 𝑡ℎ𝑒𝑖𝑟 𝑛𝑜𝑢𝑟𝑖𝑠ℎ𝑖𝑛𝑔.
𝐼𝑓 𝐼 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑖𝑚𝑝𝑟𝑜𝑣𝑒 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑠𝑒𝑒 𝑎 𝑙𝑖𝑔ℎ𝑡 𝑡ℎ𝑎𝑡 𝑤𝑜𝑢𝑙𝑑 𝑠ℎ𝑖𝑛𝑒, 𝑡ℎ𝑒𝑛 𝑚𝑦 𝑡𝑒𝑎𝑟𝑠 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑏𝑒 𝑛𝑜 𝑚𝑜𝑟𝑒 𝑡ℎ𝑒𝑦 𝑤𝑜𝑢𝑙𝑑 𝑎𝑙𝑙 𝑠𝑡𝑜𝑝 𝑑𝑟𝑜𝑝𝑝𝑖𝑛𝑔.

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𝐵𝑢𝑡 𝑎𝑐𝑡𝑢𝑎𝑙𝑙𝑦 𝐼 𝑚𝑦 𝑏𝑜𝑛𝑒𝑠 𝑎𝑟𝑒 𝑗𝑢𝑠𝑡 𝑖𝑚𝑝𝑟𝑜𝑣𝑖𝑛𝑔, 𝐼 𝑐𝑎𝑛 𝑠𝑡𝑟𝑒𝑡𝑐ℎ, 𝑡𝑜𝑠𝑠 𝑎𝑟𝑜𝑢𝑛𝑑, 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑠𝑛𝑒𝑒𝑧𝑒 𝑤𝑖𝑡ℎ𝑜𝑢𝑡 𝑔𝑟𝑜𝑎𝑛𝑖𝑛𝑔.
𝐴 𝑓𝑒𝑤 𝑦𝑒𝑎𝑟𝑠 𝑎𝑔𝑜 𝑡ℎ𝑎𝑡 𝑤𝑎𝑠𝑛'𝑡 𝑡ℎ𝑒 𝑐𝑎𝑠𝑒, 𝑏𝑒𝑐𝑎𝑢𝑠𝑒 𝑝𝑎𝑖𝑛 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑚𝑖𝑠𝑒𝑟𝑦 𝑎𝑙𝑤𝑎𝑦𝑠 𝑔𝑖𝑣𝑒𝑠 𝑚𝑒 𝑎 𝑐ℎ𝑎𝑠𝑒.
𝐴𝑓𝑡𝑒𝑟 𝑎𝑙𝑙 𝑚𝑦 𝑒𝑓𝑓𝑜𝑟𝑡𝑠 𝑡𝑜 𝑠𝑎𝑣𝑒 𝑚𝑦𝑠𝑒𝑙𝑓 𝑓𝑟𝑜𝑚 𝑝𝑎𝑖𝑛 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑚𝑖𝑠𝑒𝑟𝑦 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑤𝑖𝑡ℎ 𝑡ℎ𝑒 𝑎𝑑𝑑𝑖𝑡𝑖𝑜𝑛 𝑜𝑓 𝐺𝑜𝑑'𝑠 𝑚𝑒𝑟𝑐𝑦.
𝐼'𝑣𝑒 𝑚𝑒𝑡 𝑔𝑟𝑒𝑎𝑡 𝑔𝑜𝑜𝑑 𝑝𝑒𝑜𝑝𝑙𝑒, 𝑚𝑦 𝑓𝑟𝑖𝑒𝑛𝑑𝑠 𝑓𝑟𝑜𝑚 𝑡ℎ𝑖𝑠 𝑐𝑜𝑚𝑚𝑢𝑛𝑖𝑡𝑦.

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𝐵𝑢𝑡 𝑎𝑡 𝑡ℎ𝑒 𝑒𝑛𝑑 𝑜𝑓 𝑡ℎ𝑒 𝑑𝑎𝑦 𝐼 𝑤𝑎𝑠 𝑙𝑒𝑓𝑡 𝑡𝑜 𝑓𝑒𝑛𝑑 𝑓𝑜𝑟 𝑚𝑦𝑠𝑒𝑙𝑓, 𝐼 𝑟𝑒𝑎𝑙𝑖𝑧𝑒𝑑 𝑡ℎ𝑎𝑡 𝑟𝑒𝑎𝑙𝑙𝑦 𝑖𝑡 𝑖𝑠 𝑗𝑢𝑠𝑡 𝑎𝑙𝑙 𝑚𝑒𝑛 𝑓𝑜𝑟 ℎ𝑖𝑚𝑠𝑒𝑙𝑓.
𝐼𝑡'𝑠 𝑗𝑢𝑠𝑡 𝑏𝑢𝑠𝑖𝑛𝑒𝑠𝑠 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑛𝑜𝑡 𝑎𝑙𝑙 𝑝𝑒𝑟𝑠𝑜𝑛𝑎𝑙, 𝑡ℎ𝑒𝑠𝑒 𝑓𝑟𝑖𝑒𝑛𝑑𝑠ℎ𝑖𝑝𝑠 𝑤𝑒𝑛𝑡 𝑖𝑛𝑡𝑜 𝑤𝑖𝑡ℎ𝑑𝑟𝑎𝑤𝑎𝑙.
𝑇ℎ𝑒𝑦 𝑎𝑙𝑙 𝑐𝑎𝑚𝑒 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑛𝑜𝑤 𝑚𝑜𝑠𝑡 𝑎𝑟𝑒 𝑔𝑜𝑛𝑒, 𝐼 𝑎𝑚 𝑡ℎ𝑎𝑛𝑘𝑓𝑢𝑙 𝑓𝑜𝑟 𝑎𝑙𝑙 𝑜𝑓 𝑡ℎ𝑎𝑡 𝑓𝑢𝑛.
𝑇𝑜 𝑠𝑢𝑟𝑣𝑖𝑣𝑒 𝑡ℎ𝑖𝑠 𝑤𝑜𝑟𝑙𝑑 𝑦𝑜𝑢 ℎ𝑎𝑣𝑒 𝑠𝑜𝑚𝑒𝑡ℎ𝑖𝑛𝑔 𝑡𝑜 𝑜𝑓𝑓𝑒𝑟 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑏𝑒ℎ𝑜𝑙𝑑, 𝑃𝑒𝑜𝑝𝑙𝑒 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑓𝑙𝑜𝑐𝑘 𝑎𝑟𝑜𝑢𝑛𝑑 𝑦𝑜𝑢 𝑙𝑖𝑘𝑒 𝑦𝑜𝑢 𝑎𝑟𝑒 𝑎 𝑠𝑖𝑙𝑣𝑒𝑟 𝑜𝑛 𝑎 𝑝𝑙𝑎𝑡𝑒 𝑜𝑓 𝑔𝑜𝑙𝑑.

Thanks @dobartim :)
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@cryptopie, I liked your poem.
It is sad and conveys all your pain from the disease.
Dialysis is a painful procedure, but you are strong in spirit and able to endure them.
I wish you strength and confidence in your recovery.

I appreciate your feedback @vipnata
But God is with me and his mercy may always be given to me.

I am confident that with the help of God and your faith in healing, it is possible to be healthy, @cryptopie

I felt sad when reading the poem, but at the same time I think that it is a form of your relief, it is good to write or to talk other people to feel better or at least let the feelings flow

Thank you @lupega
I appreciate your feedback and support.

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