• You have shared your writing and explanation about how you created your YouTube channel well. However, you need to explain it in more detail so that many beginners can follow in your footsteps.

• For the banner, you have explained the background in accordance with the content you upload on your YouTube channel. However, you did not explain how to upload it, complete with editing instructions. You should also explain the reasons for and how to upload your profile photo properly.

• You need to explain your channel description well so that other friends can follow in your footsteps. Although you have already added your social media accounts to make it easier for people to get to know you, which is great.

• I'm glad you explained your channel well in the video. My suggestion is that you use subtitles to make it easier for viewers to follow the explanation, even though the audio in the video is already clear.

But don't worry, you've done a great job. I'm also very happy if you continue to follow the advanced lessons in the second week. I noticed you haven't used thumbnails on your videos, the proper way to use titles that catch viewers' attention, and so on, because all of that is very important for the growth of our YouTube channel.