I like it.

If I can make a suggestion to improve (Even though I'm far from an expert when it comes to drawing) is to make more confident lines. As in try to lift your pencil as little as possible.

One thing that is also on my list in order to become a better artist is finishing this course. https://drawabox.com/

Maybe you'd like it, it's basically a free Drawing course, comes with a discord channel where people review your homework and all.

Cheers.