Recommendations and suggestions

Your beautiful voice amazed me; it's incredible. However, there was no introduction or conclusion, and you should pay attention to these two aspects, as they are very important.

At one point, you paused while singing, and I nearly thought you had lost your voice, but you were too fast while singing, remember that you have to mind your speed and sing gently while performing. Overall, everything was good, but I hope you can improve next time.

Good luck!

Thank You