What a beautiful moment for Odinaka and Jasper, at the end they have enough to settle their debt. I love fictions with happy ending. I look forward to reading the scene two/ part two. Thanks for sharing with us here we really appreciate.

Observation

• You title is not well written,it still has the markdown code on it. Well you were not suppose to add it to it.

• You also didn't use the appropriate markdown for the content,the story itself.

• You didn't use any tag,which make it difficult to spot this post for curation

Recommendation

Kindly visit the Newcomers community to learn markdown. The task four (4) should solve the issue of markdown. Do well to read up and try it out. It will make your work look good and presentable.

Thanks once again for sharing your nice write up in this communinty. We would love to read more from you.