AN UN-WELCOMED AUTUMN by #tanviryousafzai

in Beauty of Creativity2 years ago

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AN UN-WELCOMED AUTUMN
A chilly dry piercing breeze,
Makes its way through all the trees.
Leaves get yellow and brown,
Trees get angry with breeze, they frown.
Boughs and branches let the greenery fall,
Birds look sad and are unhappy all.
Their homely nests peep out from the boughs,
How painful and pathetic it shows.
Their feeble weak little bodies shake,
Autumnly breeze hisses like a snake.
Leaves gather around trees and mourn,
They cry when stamped or thrown.
Flowers unwillingly strip off every petal,
They cry and wish to be a stainless metal.
Why nature sheds these days?
Why there is so much curse in Autumn's gaze?
She comes very secretly and slow,
And silently snatches everything's glow.
Is she haunted by a spooky spirit?
No, it's her nature she won't regret.
Let's become hypocrite and welcome her,
Hug her with nasty grin.
thanks to all members of this community

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 2 years ago 

Your poetry is very good. But you do not include a link to the source of the photo you are using.

original source

brother in the next post i include the source ......

 2 years ago 

Looking forward to you doing something better.

 2 years ago 

GOOD EFFORT.
When you find the plagiarism content then mention the moderator name in the below comment section of the user post.

 2 years ago 

Next time I will mention the name of the moderator in the comments section. Hope not that there will be no more plagiarized content in the future.

 2 years ago 

I appreciate your effort. You are showing loyalty to our community.

Cc.
@faisalamin
@abduhawab

 2 years ago 

I've been on the Steemit platform for almost a year, and maybe the BOC Community is a community that really fits my interests and hobbies.

Every day after I post content, I explore this community, see the latest beauty and creativity from all community members, also leave some comments. When I find plagiarized content, I feel I have to tell and warn the content creator. Because we all want to see Something really beautiful and creative here. Me and all the members, I think we have to show our loyalty to our great community.

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