Hello @peacebaby, we are happy to have you here in the community.
You've made good points in the contest topic. I must inform you that in steemit, there are rules that we must all follow regarding making quality posts. First you must write at least 250 words and secondly it is always recommended to use at least one image for your posts. This will make your post more interesting and appealing to the audience. Please be guided by this in case of next time. Thank you for your participation in steemkids community....