The Golden pen act 1 scene 2 by @fortwis09 10% payout to steemkidss

in Steem Kids & Parents3 years ago (edited)

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Hello dear kids of this amazing community, it has been really a while, 6 days to be exact that i have not made a post, but i am very happy to be back again this time to continue my story entitled

THE GOLDEN PEN

characters in the story

  • Golden: The core character

  • Filia and Rose: her sisters

  • Grace: her mum

  • Tweety, cici and lily: HER FREINDS

  • Brownson: her husband

  • Kingsley, Gold and Silver: her kids

  • Mara and Clara: Her sisters friends

  • Old woman

  • Customer

  • Madam Lydia: her boss

PREVIEW OF LAST TIME

We learnt about the family of Golden and their tight financial schedule, but it was lighten up by the girl. she vows never to
give a penny of her spending to her lazy sisters, and keeps the money in her custody.

TODAY'S PREVIEW

we are going to see an exciting twist in their lives.

(Act 1 scene 2)

(the next day, Golden is arranging the bananas on the tray for sale, while doin that her sister Rose , walks inside)

Rose: Golden! what was the meaning of that reaction yesterday do you realize that you made me feel ABASHED of myself, i could not look Filia in the eye.

Golden; Hahaha, oh so it is now that you feel abashed of yourself, stay there and don't wise up, idiot!!
(she watches as golden leaves with their mum, she stands there like a statue, looking at the corner where golden stood, she stands until Filia runs by)

Filia; Hey Rose, why are you looking there, have you seen a ghost huh?
(over there at the traffic light, Golden sees a woman whose wallet has fallen off, a thief picks it up nd begins passing)

Golden; Hey ma, your wallet is being stolen (she runs like flash with her long legs and catches up with the thief, kicks him in between his legs an snatches the wallet, and gives it to the old woman)

Old woman; oh thank you my little love, wait a bit (she fiddle with her wallet and brings out a pen, it had a blue cover and a funny brown body, she gave it to Golden and begins walking slowly away, golden looks and the pen, and follows her all the way to a dark home, were she suddenly disappears, golden goes home with the pen)

Golden; This women seems so mysterious, should i still take this pen, anyways let me try it out. (she goes home famished, looks at the pen and throws it on an old worn out dress, she wants to leave, but hears a tingling sound, she turns back only to see the pen in a golden color, and the dress very pretty, she wears it in front of her mum)

Grace: What, where did you get such pretty clothes from( she explains to her mum, keeps the pen on her mum clothes and it also becomes beautiful, her sisters jump out of nowhere, and says

her sisters; Please give us the pen.

Golden; Never, lazy bones will i give you my hard earned pen, (she quickly goes inside.)

Filia: Why does Golden hate us so much?(Filia drags Rose inside who is crying and asks) do you really want that pen

Rose: Yes, and i will do anything to get it

(they go to their mum, and they all agree to steal the pen from Golden and run away)

What will poor Golden DO
(LIGHT FADES)

ON THE NEXT SCENE

WHAT DOES GOLDENS FAMILY DO TO POOR GOLDEN

Hope you liked it, bye.

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This is the link to my introduction post

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 3 years ago 

Wow
I'm anticipating the continuation.

 3 years ago 

You will surely see it my dear

 3 years ago 

Wow interesting anticipating what the poor golden will do and if truly they will steal the pen thank you so much for sharing this with us here, anticipating the continuation of the story

 3 years ago 

🤗🤗🤭, thanks, we will see in the next scene, and it is loading...

 3 years ago 

Such an amazing story! I can't wait to read what happen next, thanks for sharing with us.

 3 years ago 

ᵗʰᵃⁿᵏ ᵠᵒᵘ ᶠᵒʳ ᵍᵒⁱⁿᵍ ᵗʰʳᵒᵘᵍʰ ᵐʸ ᵇˡᵒᵍ ᵐᵃ, ι нορє γου ωιℓℓ ϐє нαρργ το ѕєє τнє иєϰτ.

 3 years ago 

Sure 😃 I will dear

 3 years ago 

🤗🤭😁

 3 years ago 

Hey its nice to read your story, i also love to write fictional stories and surely would write one

 3 years ago 

I enjoy fictional stories themselves, if you do then you can look at the previous one i just concluded, you can see hem all using he link i will drop.
here is the link
i will love to see your own stories, an do notify me when you do so, you can also drop it in s-kids corner.
thanks for reading my post

This is a nice story and I have learnt a lot from this story keep up @fortwis09

 3 years ago 

Yeah, standby for the next update

It's good that Golden has a good heart like such. Imagine what could have happened if she didn't help the old lady, she would have missed the golden opportunity.
Well her name is Golden, she helped a woman and gained a Golden pen and because she wasn't like her sisters she didn't miss the golden opportunity.
You got everything well planned in this writeup dear. All areas connect with each other.
Golden's sisters really thought she could give them the pen? How funny they are. They haven't seen anything yet.

The biggest amazement is how the pen is able to change Golden's dress to a very pretty one as you described. I can only imagine.
The next part is what I eagerly long for now. Let's see the turnup of the next scene.

#affable #nigeria

 3 years ago 

She is so golden like her name implies, the old lady was looking for a girl, but sadly Golden's sisters didn't fall it was their youngest sister✨ imagine that. it was such a Golden opportunity, she was willing to do anything for herum, but imagine what they will do to her in the next scene.
Well it takes me nothing to write stories, just a little air and imagination then a story is set up.
It is about to get worse or better, the Golden pen had turned their lives Golden, that's why the pen turned the cloth beautiful.
Do stay put for more updates, it's about to get tastier.
Thanks for going through my post.

 3 years ago 

Keep on writing and entertaining us with these master pieces

 3 years ago 

Sure dear, do you also love writing stories, I heard you love writing poems, i do to, it's all my hubby.

 3 years ago 

Really, really interesting
Golden is really in trouble with her lazy sisters who are only working hard to steal

Thanks dear. I love your story

 3 years ago 

Thanks, she is in trouble but let's watch and see.
I am blushing 🤭🤭🤗🤗🤭🤭🤭 again

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