Contest:Creative Short Story writing || The incomplete part of my story in the contest.
Hello my dear steemians!
I hope you are all well. Friends, today I have the opportunity to come among all of you through my first contest. Here I got a golden opportunity to complete the incomplete story through a contest topic organized by @Steem-Bangladesh community and @nahidhasan23 sir. From the bottom of my heart I would like to express my deepest respect and thanks to @nahidhasan23 sir from the @ Steem-Bangladesh community for giving me a golden opportunity here. I hope you like my entry and give me a chance to move forward.
The first part of the story given in the contest:
Jessy is a single mother of a blind daughter. Her husband died 3 years ago in a car accident. Her daughter's name is Angela. She is two years old. That's not all. They have a pet dog named Fluffy. Jessy's husband gifted Fluffy in their first anniversary. From that day Fluffy is staying with them. Fluffy is holding Jessy's husband's memory.
One day Jessy had to go out of town for some work. She took her daughter and Fluffy with them. She went to the railway station. She bought a bottle of water from a shop. After that they entered a cabin of train. She felt odd because there was only one passenger in that cabin.
The passenger was drunken. Some times later she realized that she forgot her purse in that shop while buying water bottle. The train ticket was in that purse. She told her daughter to stay there with Fluffy. She went to the shop. She took her purse from that shop and came back. But she was late. The train left.........
The incomplete part of my story in the contest:
Not seeing the train at the scene, the sky seemed to fall on Jessy's head. In an instant, she fell to the ground as if she had lost her speech.At the last moments Jessy started crying for blind girl Angela and her beloved husband lost the fluffy dog.Because three years ago she had to spend an unusually painful day in the emptiness of losing her husband. And now she lost it again due to unavoidable reasons and fell to the ground and started crying profusely. But in this busiest city, the cruel people did not come forward to comfort her. Eventually Jessy asked the train ticket seller staff to find out the destination of the train.
According to the train address, Jessy boarded the next train with the courage to look for the blind girl Angela and her husband's favorite memory Fluffy. Jessy, on the other hand, found the drunken man strange, but he was a good man at heart, because one day, after losing his family in an unusual accident, the man went insane and became addicted to drugs.The drunken man in particular is in a mad state after losing his beloved daughter. Angela, meanwhile, cries loudly in the absence of her mother, who is only two years old, and Fluffio, a helpless creature, barks at Angela's cries. With no one else in the cabin of the train, the drunken man saw little Angela crying and remembered his lost daughter. So he took Angela in his arms to comfort her.
The drunken man seems to change in an instant when he finds Angela. It looks like a healthy normal person. Eventually the train stopped at the destination. Angela, two years old, is so young that she can't even tell her identity. Unable to find any identity, he took Angela and Fluffy home. Jessy, on the other hand, goes to the destination of the train according to the address, but in this busy city, the stranger is alone, looking for her like crazy without finding her. But eventually fails to find and continues to spend miserable days.Thus Jessy continues to look for the girl day after day, month after month. Meanwhile, the drunken man fills the void of the lost girl by getting Angela. In this way, the man returns to normal life. And Angela continues to grow. Thus ten years passed. Suddenly the man fell ill. But there was no money to cure the disease and take medicine. Because the man became intoxicated in the earlier days and became destitute by selling land and property. Now he lives by working outside in pursuit of livelihood.
Being ill makes the day difficult to pass. Eventually, 12-year-old Angela finds no way to escape poverty and sell flowers to Fluffy on the street to make a living. Fluffy shows her the way. In this way she earns money by selling flowers and makes the person healthy. Jessy inevitably bumps into Angela on the street to sell flowers as usual, and the two fall apart. But Angela had a necklace around her mother's neck and could recognize Fluffy. The mother finally finds her lost daughter.Eventually the drunk man goes to the house and Jenny can recognize the drunk man. Accepts him as big brother. Because Angela's father died before she was born. If Jenny had been married to someone else, she would have been married soon after her husband died. And in that sense, it is possible Jenny could not replace her husband. So the drunk addressed the man as a brother. Now they all live in Jenny's house and live a beautiful life.
The main point of my story:
It is a fictional story where the story of a helpless woman who lost her husband forever and lost her daughter comes to light. Fluffy is a helpless animal that occupies a special place in the story. The dog has made significant contributions to Angela's blind movement and has been a good companion in life's bad situations. Here the main character is revealed by a drunken man. The void of losing his daughter has been filled by getting Angela and getting back to normal life.From this story, it is concluded that the blood relationship is never lost. Because here the story of Jenny and Angela has a similar story. So I think this story is a suitable story by @nahidhasan23 to organize a beautiful competition with good initiative. Thank you very much and respect from the bottom of my heart.
I hope you enjoy reading my full story. If you like my story please support and give me a chance to move forward on this platform with enthusiasm. If you also want a chance to tell your own story, visit contest @nahidhasan23 to participate in the contest. HERE
Nice story. Nice plot. Keep it up.