|| Contest : Creative Short Story Writing || My Imaginary Complete Story by @nhananto
Hello steemians, I am @nhananto participating in a contest: Creative Short Story Writing.
Thank you @nahidhasan23 brother for arranging such a wonderful topic. So without making any delay let's begin it.
Given Incomplete Story
Jessy is a single mother of a blind daughter. Her husband died 3 years ago in a car accident. Her daughter's name is Angela. She is two years old. That's not all. They have a pet dog named Fluffy. Jessy's husband gifted Fluffy in their first anniversary. From that day Fluffy is staying with them. Fluffy is holding Jessy's husband's memory.
One day Jessy had to go out of town for some work. She took her daughter and Fluffy with them. She went to the railway station. She bought a bottle of water from a shop. After that they entered a cabin of train. She felt odd because there was only one passenger in that cabin.
The passenger was drunken. Some times later she realized that she forgot her purse in that shop while buying water bottle. The train ticket was in that purse. She told her daughter to stay there with Fluffy. She went to the shop. She took her purse from that shop and came back. But she was late. The train left.........
My Imaginary Complete Story
As soon as the train started, Fluffy started hesitating. Jess became so sad and worried as well. She shouted saying "Stop the train! Someone please help!!". But a train can be stopped without pulling the chain. And who will pull the chain, the only person who can pull the chain is the person in the cabin but he is drunken.
Fluffy was running here and there to find the way out but he also didn't want to let the child alone. He barked so much but the drunken was out of mind. It's been 10 minutes and the 2years old little baby girl realizing that her mother is not with her. A little 2years girl alone with a dog and drunken guy, helpless.
Jessy tried to be calm and started thinking, what she can do, how she can reach them. She found an idea, she decided to book a taxi to the next train station so that she can reach them. This is the only way she could think of that panicking situation. She rushed for searching for a taxi, found one, and started her journey.
After about 35 minutes, the baby was crying loudly and Fluffy was trying to control the baby girl. Fluffy is a clever and experienced dog as he was with that family for many years. Fluffy pulls out a bottle of milk from the food bag that Jessy left that time. He gave it to the girl and managed to stop her crying somehow. In a minute, the train reached the next train station. The train stopped and a mature guy hopped in the cabin.
Jessy was in the taxi, the destination is that train which just now left the platform. She was late, she again missed the train. Now reached the train station and asked the nearby shops, "The train? Has the train left already?". "Yes", the shop owner said. She felt so broken that she might never see her daughter and Fluffy again. She was just thinking about them with flooding of tears.
That mature guy stepped into the cabin and saw the baby girl and the dog. He also saw the drunken guy sleeping on the seat. At first, he thought that the girl must be with the drunken guy and he didn't care that much. Fluffy saw some hope with the mature guy. He(Fluffy) started fulling his (the guy) leg. After several times, the guy realized something is wrong. He made the drunken guy up and asked "Is this girl and dog with you?". The drunken guy said, "No! Let me sleep". At that moment the guys guessed that the girl and the dog are lost. He picked up the girl gently, fed her. He started thinking, how can he contact the owner. The bag Jessy left, he started searching in it and he found an ID card of Jessy and the contact number. He called Jessy.
Jessy was thinking to go to the police station for reporting about her loss of the girl and the dog. But, Jessy was so broken that can't even get up and go to the police station. She was standing up somehow, her phone rang. An unknown number and she just ignored that call. The phone rang again and this time she picked the call and heard "Hello Mrs. Jessy, it's Jhonson. I found a girl and dog in the cabin of a train. Do you know them?". Jessy was so happy and nervous as well. She said with excitement voice, "Yes, the girl is my daughter, where are they? How are they? Are they fine?". The guy said, "Don't worry mam, they are absolutely fine, and please relax. I will drop them whenever you want".
They fixed a place to meet and the guy handed over the girl and Fluffy to Jessy. Jessy was so happy and thankful for Jhonson. Also, they became good friends later days and they are thinking to start a new life.
Sometimes we face a lot of problems. But we should never give up. Every problem has a solution. Just keep hope, pray to the almighty and try. Somehow, someday, someone will of course come to help you.
The End
I hope you guys like it. If you do, please comment and support me.
Thank you.
Best Regards,
Very good creative writing indeed. Good Luck
#bd-comment
Angela is two years old. It's mentioned in the starting of the story. You addressed angela as baby, which I don't think two years olds are baby. Though nice imaginary.