Creative Short Story Writing Contest: My ending to the unfinished story

in Steem Bangladesh3 years ago (edited)

Hello Steemians!!!
Thank you to @Steembangladesh and @nahidhasan23 for the opportunity to participate in this contest. I will be completing a story from my imagination and I hope you enjoy it😍😋😘🤗.

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Incomplete story:
Jessy is a single mother of a blind daughter. Her husband died 3 years ago in a car accident. Her daughter's name is Angela. She is two years old. That's not all. They have a pet dog named Fluffy. Jessy's husband gifted Fluffy in their first anniversary. From that day Fluffy is staying with them. Fluffy is holding Jessy's husband's memory.

One day Jessy had to go out of town for some work. She took her daughter and Fluffy with them. She went to the railway station. She bought a bottle of water from a shop. After that they entered a cabin of train. She felt odd because there was only one passenger in that cabin.

The passenger was drunken. Some times later she realized that she forgot her purse in that shop while buying water bottle. The train ticket was in that purse. She told her daughter to stay there with Fluffy. She went to the shop. She took her purse from that shop and came back. But she was late. The train left.........

My ending to the incomplete story
The train left without Jessy. When Angela realized that her mother wasn't around,she tried reaching out to other passengers,not knowing that she,the dog,the drunk and driver were the only ones available in the train. When the drunk realized that Angela was blind and alone,he tried to take advantage of the situation by offering a hand of help to her. Angela who wasn't away of the situation,found solace in the arms of a stranger.
Jessy on the other hand was crying and turning from one stranger to the other for help but no one was willing to help because to some she seemed crazy,to others she was careless and to some they couldn't make out what she was saying due to her uncontrollable tears. A good Samaritan by name Ms. Becky walked up to her and told her that everything would be fine that she should calm down and explain what happened exactly. After Jessy's explanation,Ms. Becky told her that she was an officer and that she was willing to help. Oh! you needed to see the joy in the eyes of Jessy,she thanked the officer so much and Ms. Becky could only imagine what her act of service meant to her.
Angela started getting uncomfortable with the way the drunk was touching her. When Fluffy noticed Angela's countenance,he began to bark loudly. He jumped on the drunk's body and began to pull at his shirt and scratch his face with his nails and teeth. The drunk now very angry at the turn of events pushed the dog so hard that he hit his back on the alarm switch in the train which drew the attention of the driver. The driver came out and saw what was happening,and of course,Angela could sense the brawl between the drunk and her dog which made her wail so loud. The driver calmed Angela down and assured her that all would be well if she tells him what happened. Angela did as she was told. The driver then called the police and relayed the whole issue to them,luckily for Angela and her mum,it was the district of Ms. Becky that the driver reported the case to.
With the help of the driver and Ms. Becky,the little family was restored. And yes,the drunk was arrested for molesting little Angela and abusing Fluffy. Fluffy was taken to a veterinarian for proper treatment

Thanks for reading and I hope you do enjoy the story😌😌😌

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 3 years ago 

Nice story writing. Great imagination.

Thank you🤗🤗🤗

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