Steemit Engagement Challenge Contest Week # 3 || Defend The Statements – By @badmus-official | 20% to pak-charity

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Hello everyone, welcome to the third week of the engagement challenge contest, I welcome you to the steem Pakistan community where I shall discuss and defend these three topics;

  • Punishment never has a good effect.
  • Money is more important than love.
  • Votes are not guaranteed - Sc01

From here on, I shall justify the above words and find a way to convince you about the above statement .Happy Reading



Punishment never has a good effect


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Yes, it is for a fact that punishment never has a good effect, mostly on kids, punishment leads to fear of doing the wrong thing not because they know it is wrong, but rather for the fact of the fear of being punished, punishment has always been traumatic to people right from a young age, sometimes it leads to abusive, I believe there is a proper way people could be discipline without them being punished.

We all know punishment comes from the habit of making a mistake, and as we all are human beings, there is no wrong act for making mistakes, rather reaping the mistakes twice or more makes it less of a mistake but rather a known actor, but most parents resolved into violence, the habits of canning or thriving the particular of hunger, all these habits don't justify disciple but rather put fear in the kid's mind.

So, to wrap up my discussion, I believe punishment is never a good way of discipline and doesn't have good effects, grown-ups themselves get traumatized from punishment, in a scenario where an adult is being sacked for making a wrong as a punishment, that kind of discipline tends to leave a hole forever in their brain for as long as it could be, and the same for kids, most kids you see that retrace in violence, has had a history of severe punishment from parents or others, this punishment has succumbed in them, traumatize them, and has changed their perspective of seeing things differently, I believe if we could have other ways of discipline without resulting into punishment, then we can have less violent people in the world.



Money is more important than love


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Well, this statement might sound mean and many might not love the fact that it is true, but it is what it is, we live in a world where the love of money supersedes the love of love itself, money, and love are two things that go hand in hand if there is no money I doubt if there could be love, lots of marriage out there crumbled with the fact that the husband can no longer take care of the family, reason due to lack of finance, I.e lack of money as he can no longer take care and support the wife and children.

The love of money comes first these days, even as an adult, no matter how pretty your looks are if you don't have money to show off of it, your looks are useless, no matter how pure your heart or your intention is, you need money regardless to move the relationship, so it goes without a say that money is far more important than love, a man buy love with genuine intention, but there is no world or universe where love can buy money.

For the love of money, here come man needs, money is a top priority, looking for love requires money itself, that is the world we live in, money can actually buy happiness to some extent, and money keeps the world moving, so I doubt if there is an argument that can be further on this other than the fact that money is more important than love, we have seen countless of home gone broken because the financial ability is no longer there, whereas a man that has money, has almost everything to himself. Thank you.



Votes are not guaranteed - Sc01


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If there is anything have learned from the past days of the engagement, is that upvotes are not guaranteed especially from the steemcurator01, these are given to people who abide by the rules, and people who also show loyalty to the steemit platform, what I'm referring to is the act of staying genuine, restraining from illegal activities such as vote-buying, account farming and all that, in the previous days, we have had encounter of some users abusing the steemit platform by participating in content farming and abusive of power.

The steem blockchain uses the proof of brain consensus, whereby the mining activity comes from the original contents delivered on the platform, the curators tend to be skeptical of who this reward goes to as they are not supposed to be given to the wrong users, whereby is the case where we have community moderates who check for plagiarism and the abiding rules requested by the steem curators, 01 votes genuine content, content with the audience as what the steemit platform is supposed to, and as well we could notice more attention on the diary games, but all this still doesn't justify the habits of receiving votes as it has always been said when most users complain about the platform.

The SC01 himself mentioned multiple times that votes are not guaranteed so regardless of your top quality or law-abiding, this doesn't warrant the users to receive upvotes, as there are multiple users on the platform, and attention can't just be focused on few, so it is natural if one receives votes today and not see on the rest as it with certainty that all votes count are seen, besides, one should also focus more on joining the higher club status, as being said by the curators that the club75 and club100 status abiders have more chance of winning, so in other to be opportune of receiving the unguaranteed votes, one could simply try to join the higher cub status.



Conclusion


From the above writeups, I have discussed the topics mentioned at the beginning of the writeups, where I have been able to justify the statement "Punishment never has a good effect, Money is more important than love, and also Votes are not guaranteed - Sc01". where from my articles, I have given a valid reason for the justification and also have been able to convince others of the act of expecting a vote from the SC01.

Many thanks to the steem Pakistan community, this is indeed a valid topic to go around in the steemit platform, as I'm sure we have been able to learn one thing or the other from the several topics. Thank you for visiting my page, see you sooner.

I invite @negro-bby, @solexybaba, and @mukky23 to participate in this contest.

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Truly punishment is not the best way to correct wrong doing, many kids become bully and transfer aggression on others because of frequent punishment which has harden her heart from doing the right thing. Also some are used to being punished, they continue with their wrongdoing as sees punishment as normal. There should be another way in correcting wrong.

Thanks for sharing your view with us.

Exactly my point, i'm glad we shared the same point of view.

Thanks for stopping by.

 2 years ago 

Thank you for taking part in the challenge and making valid points to defend the statements.

Don't forget to interact with other contest participants by commenting and upvoting their posts.

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Thanks for the evaluation.

I believe punishment is a good deterrence but it shouldn't be used in all cases. If we say in totality that punishment never has a good effect I will disagree with you. Even though the line is thing their is a difference between brutalising and punishing someone. I think brutalising a person based n the name of punishment is what doesn't have a good effect.

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