Let not start any text ever this way:

Greeting to all my steemit friends.How are you all ?Hope you all are fine and enjoying life i am also fine and happy.My name is @aminshahid and i am from pakistan. Today the great oppertunity give us by the community is Knack4buzz and and it is organized by @hive135004 .I hope you all enjoy my post.SO LETS START MY POST

This is a good reason to not read you. It's not inviting.
Capital letters? It stands for SHOUTING
Another reason to stop reading.

If you remove that part text it looks 10x better.

Now this. Am I the only one seeing this?

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