Hi dear, as you know this community is about entertainment.

We ONLY accept entertaining diaries!

Yours is not about entertainment and also not written in an entertaining way (think for example about standup comedians: writevas if you talk to a oublic and add kokes/anecdotes so it sparkles more.

You made a choice to join the diary-contest and the theme us: Festival (celebration)!
This means you have to write about a festival and not about waking up, getting dressed, eating and being on Steemit. Great you did this but it has nithing to do with FESTIVAL.

I suggest you edit your post and focus on the festival unless you have nothing to share. 🤔

The moderator left you more tips to improve your text.

Good luck.