Story Review by Dinaks44

in CampusConnect2 years ago (edited)

In the eye of the storm

Chapter one: cold and hot

Review

Plot;

the plot of chapter one of “in the eye of the storm “ was well arranged. The writer robTheir made a very story beginning keeping his readers at suspension making them hungry for more.


Setting:

The beginning of the story starts at a beach , you will be hearing words like ashore, boat , ship , ocean these things you often hear at the beach.


Characterization;

well this is between Lilly who is the main person in the chapter,the captain of the wrecked ship and the search crew. The writer used his actions very diligently in the sense that you can see the actions in your head, is like film in the novel.


Play:

this is about a girl Lilly linton who’s shipwreck on the way to Britain and in the process losing her boss as she thought. Her boss being a very powerful blended into the boat like a low life and is being searched for, Lilly who is in love but not ready to accept it is pressuring the captain to search for him lying saying its her cousin. Captain who said he can’t put effort into searching just one man , was told the name of the man Rikkard Ambrose one of The richest men in the world,he quickly organized more search parties to keep the search on till his found.
Many bodies were discovered but None marched Lilly description of the man until a boat found a body washed ashore stating his alive Lilly is now to go and check if truly that is her man.
Wait up for chapter two robThier knows how to keep readers at suspense so just keep in touch for chapter two.

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 2 years ago (edited)

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