Story Review by dinaks44

in CampusConnect2 years ago

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IN THE EYE OF THE STORM

Review

Chapter 21:

Explosion and Abduction
Hello guys
Thank you for coming to read again I really appreciate ❤️ the link to the previous chapter’s link is down below.
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Setting

The Victorian era , France in the eighteen hundreds


Characterization:

Lily Linton ,Mr Ambrose.


Plot

Yes there was an explosion and when I say explosion I mean real explosions it took down the wall of the hotel room, Lily didn’t even know where she was again until Mr Ambrose told her to stay down and then at that moment Lily asked what was going on and Mr Ambrose replies they know we are here and then there was a war cry and it was karim which came in in the room leading them through a hole . They where gunshots everywhere and karim told his master to go that he will hold them of. Speaking of karim Lily is never happy to see karim until that day , Mr Ambrose and Lily went further looking for a way out , then group of men where approaching Mr Ambrose took out his revolver and clucked it and when they were close he took the shots without hesitation and they moved further, they were further movement and there was only one bullet left but as the thudding sound got close it was youssef one of Mr Ambrose men who he asked why he let these men in the hotel, the man explains that they all lodged in like regular people and he asked for forgiveness. They made a circle around Mr Ambrose as they lead him to the exit but guess what Lily was on the outside, as she struggled to get in one of the guards place a gun to her head but a cold voice said the woman is with me they moved down the stair down to the dinning , lily tried to see through but all the men were taller until they went down stairs everything was scattered, the tables , chairs and people were running for their lives. But when Mr Ambrose and his men were moving towards the exit Lily ran to a room tapping the older woman who she said was her grandma she couldn’t hear well so Lily tried to explain that it’s young people partying that they will reck the place down that she should get out ,but while she was there mr Ambrose came in and carried the woman who screamed help that a kidnapper got her and they got to the cart outside he dropped the old lady inside and entered lily struggled to get in before the cart moved . Lily asked about karim but there was no response, they lodge the woman into another hotel and they moved to a lonely dark street to a place which smelt like fish. Lily asked if the owner of the place wouldn’t be angry but Mr Ambrose replies he won’t because he is there showing his the owner , then they got a place to sleep and lily was feeling drowsy so she went to sleep and Mr Ambrose well just watched her.

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