Story Review by dinaks44

in CampusConnect2 years ago

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In the eye of the storm

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Settings

This goes on in the early eighteen hundreds in the Victorian era.


Characterization

Lily linton also classified as Mr linton
Mr Ambrose also know as sahib
Karim
Coles


Plot

Black ship

It starts of with Mr Ambrose looking into the waters at the docks,he stares into the water like he has a something against it, Lilly then taps him at the back greeting him, he turns around so fast almost pushing her down. There was a shock on his face upon seeing her, he was surprised how she attended without her family disturbing her then she explains that she told her aunt she is going to see her grand mother and might get a husband from there , their is a grind on his face and he asks if the grandmother won’t contact her aunt and she replies no she won’t because they don’t get along. Then karim who lily hasn’t seen a long time calls sahib that the captain said we should start loading things on board then sees lily who he asked why she is going on the journey with them and gets no reply from the cold Mr Ambrose and he apologies immediately. Lily asked where she would drop her luggage and he replies while walking away “you wouldn’t need them” she asked him why while he hurried away. She runs up to him and asks looking at the ship if that’s what they are going to travel on and he affirmed it. She says in her mind that who ship is rusted and made of iron will it even move away near the harbor before it collapse. He sees Mr Ambrose staring at the waters like it has wronged him by being too wet and comes asking where is my cabin , he instructs her third room by the left she asked why do you have a cabin prepared for me when you expected and didn’t want me to come and he tells her he makes it a point to always prepares for the worst. She takes her luggage to the tight room which she thinks Mr Ambrose is worthy of taking this type of boat with less comfortable cabin. She gets a knock on her door requesting he has her luggage but she tells him is all complete but says Mr Ambrose requests he drops it off here that they are no light she should open real quick. She opens a man named cole comes in and drops the bag in and was greeted by a warm smile by lily and he walks away. She goes to check the bag and finds out it’s locked. She swears if his thinking she will come begging to ask what’s in it let her face turn blue.

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