It's hard to not revert to cliche and come up with pretty stilted metaphor when writing about metaphysical stuff like this. I think I did an OK job given that it only went through a few drafts.
It's always great to hear from a fantastic writer like yourself, to reassure me that my confidence in this one wasn't misplaced :)
Sry to respond so late, my main account is completely depleted of VP due to delegation running out, which leaves me unable to comment/vote or do much of anything with the raj808 account for a few days lol
I think a lot of change could be achieved if people understood, and practiced the art of finding eternity in breath. After all... what is the famous saying... 'just stop and take a breath' ;-)
Sry to respond so late, my main account is completely depleted of VP due to delegation running out, which leaves me unable to comment/vote or do much of anything with the raj808 account for a few days lol
I think a lot of change could be achieved if people understood, and practiced the art of finding eternity in breath. After all... what is the famous saying... 'just stop and take a breath' ;-)
Beautiful work, @raj808! I love the combination of images and poetry. And these are thought provoking poems!
Thanks jayna :)
It's hard to not revert to cliche and come up with pretty stilted metaphor when writing about metaphysical stuff like this. I think I did an OK job given that it only went through a few drafts.
It's always great to hear from a fantastic writer like yourself, to reassure me that my confidence in this one wasn't misplaced :)
Thanks again, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
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STOPAmazing @raj808 .... breath IS life indeed. Literally just posted a breath focused post and here this poem!
So true. So precious.
Hi @riverflows
Sry to respond so late, my main account is completely depleted of VP due to delegation running out, which leaves me unable to comment/vote or do much of anything with the raj808 account for a few days lol
I think a lot of change could be achieved if people understood, and practiced the art of finding eternity in breath. After all... what is the famous saying... 'just stop and take a breath' ;-)
I love this, if only we could all see our potential and how change is within our hands, as it is our actions that will bring it about. xxxx
Hi @trucklife-family
Sry to respond so late, my main account is completely depleted of VP due to delegation running out, which leaves me unable to comment/vote or do much of anything with the raj808 account for a few days lol
I think a lot of change could be achieved if people understood, and practiced the art of finding eternity in breath. After all... what is the famous saying... 'just stop and take a breath' ;-)
I so love this poem xxx
Thanks xxx
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